
Lone soul in bare night
A beacon, beckoning love
Pride, in world so lost
Loneliness,
has many faces.
When finally unveiled,
invokes fragility amidst pride,
blocking one from admitting.
My reaction in the form of haiku and gogyahka to an invoking image and challenge from Sadje’s What Do You See #69.
Beautifully written Erlyn! Sometimes our pride stops us from revealing our loneliness. Profound take. Thanks for joining in
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Thank you, Sadje. Happy to join any time.
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You’re welcome my friend
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Lovely writing
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Thank you, Jude. I appreciate your comment.
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A pleasure
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A lovely piece!
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