(I)
cold frost still lingers
lichening wildly on vines
the lone spirit stands
(II)
naked and lonely
it whistles tirelessly
summoning love birds
Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge no. 215 – Poet’s Choice! This time I offer you another sketch of a tree and two haikus to accompany the sketch. Hence, what I actually offer this time is a haiga. Haiga is a haiku accompanied by a picture. Haiga, haiku, well, in reality the separation line is very thin. What’s more important is to enjoy making it.
rake the dead leaves
and purr
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I learned something, a haiga. Your drawing is beautiful. I had to look up lichening. I didn’t know it was a verb, and found out it can affect people as well. I wouldn’t want it happening wildly on my body! 🙂 Well written.
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It’s just a play of words. That’s the beauty of poem, especially haiku when we have limitations on words sometimes. So I made it a verb 😀 😀Thank you for visiting and leaving me a comment. 😊
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I think it works, though. I looked it up, that’s how involved I got!
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Excellent! 😀
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Excellent work.I love the detail in your drawing and your haiku are excellent. Great word choices! ❤
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Thank you, Colleen 🙂
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You’re welcome 😍
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Love these haiku❤️
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Thanks again.
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Wonderful Haiku and drawing.
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Thank you.
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