Immortal


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Just one more memory of sunset,

carved immortally in my soul,

a last plight

before ending this fight,

fading into eternity.


#Tanka Tuesday Weekly #Poetry Challenge no. 217 – Theme: Immortality Poetry form was written using Gogyohka.

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  1. Very peaceful 😌

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    1. Erlyn Olivia says:

      Thank you very much for your comment.

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  2. Your verse complements the photo so well. I like the message, too. ❤

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    1. Erlyn Olivia says:

      Thank you, Colleen.

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  3. judeitakali says:

    So beautiful.

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  4. -Eugenia says:

    Beautifully penned!

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  5. A wonderful merging of image and words.

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    1. Erlyn Olivia says:

      Thank you very much for your comment. 🙂

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