Death, Gogyohka, Life, Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge

Immortal

Posted by Erlyn Olivia on
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Just one more memory of sunset,

carved immortally in my soul,

a last plight

before ending this fight,

fading into eternity.

#Tanka Tuesday Weekly #Poetry Challenge no. 217 – Theme: Immortality Poetry form was written using Gogyohka.

9 Comments

  1. 100 Country Trek says:
    March 18, 2021 at 1:51 am

    Very peaceful 😌

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    1. Erlyn Olivia says:
      March 18, 2021 at 4:41 am

      Thank you very much for your comment.

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  2. Colleen M. Chesebro says:
    March 18, 2021 at 2:58 am

    Your verse complements the photo so well. I like the message, too. ❤

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    1. Erlyn Olivia says:
      March 18, 2021 at 1:22 am

      Thank you, Colleen.

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  3. judeitakali says:
    March 19, 2021 at 6:25 pm

    So beautiful.

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  4. -Eugenia says:
    March 20, 2021 at 1:29 pm

    Beautifully penned!

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  6. Smorgasbord - Variety is the Spice of Life. says:
    March 22, 2021 at 3:57 pm

    A wonderful merging of image and words.

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    1. Erlyn Olivia says:
      March 23, 2021 at 7:37 am

      Thank you very much for your comment. 🙂

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