When I was young, I thought having a life dream is enough
Visionless, I’ve lost my way, thought I found it back, then lost again
Now I learn to trust my heart when deciding which path to take
The poem above is written following a sijo format. Sijo is the classic form of unrhymed poetry from Korea. Sijo poems have three long lines. Each line varies between 14 and 16 syllables, with the middle line the longest. The first line states a theme, the second line counters it, and the third line resolves the poem.
This time I followed the prompt from napowrimo.net to write my closing poem for this memorable month. The prompt says to write a poem in the form of a direction to get to a particular place. It could be a real, an imaginary or unreal place.
It’s been fun, NaPoWriMo. My first time trying to write every day for a month. Not an easy one, but I’m happy to say that it’s a success!
It is a beautiful poem Erlyn.
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Thank you, Jim.
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“Not I, nor anyone else can travel that road for you.
You must travel it by yourself.
It is not far. It is within reach.
Perhaps you have been on it since you were born, and did not know.
Perhaps it is everywhere – on water and land.”
― Walt Whitman, Leaves of Grass
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Beautiful quote, Ivor. Thank you for that quote.
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My pleasure
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Beautifully done, Erlyn!
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Thank you, Eugenia.
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Most welcome!
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words to live by
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Indeed. Thank you, Ruth.
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Deep thought. I feel like if the heart can choose the destination, and the brain can act as guide, then we have a great recipe for happiness.
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Beautifully written. KL ❤
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Thank you again, KL. I appreciate your comments.
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